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fix: revise the sentence in second bullet #380

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@CBID2 CBID2 commented Aug 14, 2023

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This PR rephrases part of the sentence displayed via the second bullet in the links subsection of the guide.

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Closes #147

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Hi @bergerhoffer! :) Here's the new PR! :)

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
Follow these guidelines when adding cross-references within your documentation:

* Include cross-references only when necessary.
* If the information is critical, consider including it instead of cross-referencing.
* When not using running text,, consider including it instead of cross-referencing.
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So the line to modify for this one was line 61, if you can make the adjustment there instead

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@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@ Follow these guidelines when specifying link text:
== Links to Red Hat Knowledgebase articles

* Use the title of the Knowledgebase article for the link text, or use descriptive running text.
* Call out that this is a Knowledgebase article when _not_ using running text.
* When not using running text, call out that this is a Knowledgebase article.
when _not_ using running text.
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This line needs to be removed

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Has some extra spacings but it doesn't look to impact the rendering.

LGTM!

@bergerhoffer bergerhoffer added the General update General updates to the guide or repo label Aug 14, 2023
@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@ Follow these guidelines when specifying link text:
== Links to Red Hat Knowledgebase articles

* Use the title of the Knowledgebase article for the link text, or use descriptive running text.
* Call out that this is a Knowledgebase article when _not_ using running text.
* When not using running text, call out that this is a Knowledgebase article.
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An example would be helpful.

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@mportman12 we already do show an example below. The "Article title" one covers this already.

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Should I revert the commit I made for that @bergerhoffer?

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I think so, unless @mportman12 has any objections or something else that we do need to address. The intent of this update was just to fix the sentence order, per Breda's issue list.

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@CBID2 when I look at the diff (https://github.com/redhat-documentation/supplementary-style-guide/pull/380/files), it looks like you removed the good, if you can make that change back:

* When not using running text, call out that this is a Knowledgebase article.

And then there are still some extra lies (62 and 67) that you had added that need to be removed still. Thanks!

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Made the changes @bergerhoffer

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@CBID2 please check the diff after your update: https://github.com/redhat-documentation/supplementary-style-guide/pull/380/files

The only change should be to line 61, not the extra lines that were added

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I think I got it this time @bergerhoffer

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I pushed an update to remove the excess text. I think this is good to go now, thanks!

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CBID2 commented Aug 16, 2023

@mportman12, all we need is your approval and then merge time! 😊

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LGTM! We need one more approval before we can merge, though.

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CBID2 commented Aug 16, 2023

@julian-cable, can you approve of this PR please?

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@CBID2 This PR would be for a different style guide that the Red Hat Documentation team uses; I am not part of that team, so I don't think I am qualified to give such an approval.

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lgtm

@bburt-rh bburt-rh merged commit 8388f54 into redhat-documentation:main Aug 16, 2023
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Approved and merged.

@CBID2 CBID2 deleted the rephrasing-sentences-take-two branch August 16, 2023 16:09
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CBID2 commented Aug 16, 2023

Great job everyone! 😊
@julian-cable, @mportman12, and @bergerhoffer, as someone who wants to pursue tech writing professionally, your assistance in my PR was very helpful! I love to stay connected with you all. Here's a link to my socials: https://linkfree.io/

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Fix various style issues and typos throughout the guide
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