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Data Warehouse is mandatory in Red Hat Virtualization.

Always spell out in full and capitalize as shown here, unless part of a command. Use "Data Warehouse", not "the Data Warehouse", unless referring to "the Data Warehouse package", "the Data Warehouse service", etc.
Always spell out in full and capitalize as shown here, unless part of a command. Use "Data Warehouse", not "the Data Warehouse", unless "Data Warehouse" functions as an adjective, for example, "the Data Warehouse package" or "the Data Warehouse service".

*Use it*: yes

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[discrete]
[[details-view]]
==== image:images/yes.png[yes] details view (noun)
*Description*: The details view shows detailed information about a selected item.
*Description*: The details view displays detailed information about a selected item.

*Use it*: yes

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[discrete]
[[host-rhv]]
==== image:images/yes.png[yes] host (noun)
*Description*: Hosts are servers that provide the processing capabilities and memory resources used to run virtual machines. There are two types of hosts: Red Hat Enterprise Linux hosts and Red Hat Virtualization Host.
*Description*: Hosts are servers that provide the processing capabilities and memory resources used to run virtual machines. There are two types of hosts: Red Hat Enterprise Linux host and Red Hat Virtualization Host.
Use "host" to refer to hosts in general, not "hypervisor", "hypervisor host", or "virtualization host". When referring to a specific type of host, use "Red Hat Enterprise Linux host" or "Red Hat Virtualization Host".

*Use it*: yes
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[discrete]
[[red-hat-enterprise-linux-host]]
==== image:images/yes.png[yes] Red Hat Enterprise Linux host (noun)
*Description*: Red Hat Enterprise Linux servers subscribed to the appropriate entitlements can be used as hosts in Red Hat Virtualization.

Always spell out in full. Do not capitalize "host".
*Description*: You can use Red Hat Enterprise Linux servers that are subscribed to the appropriate entitlements as hosts in Red Hat Virtualization.

Always spell out the full product name of the host, and do not capitalize the term "host".
*Use it*: yes

*Incorrect forms*: RHEL host, RHEL-H
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==== image:images/yes.png[yes] Red Hat Virtualization Host (noun)
*Description*: Red Hat Virtualization Host is the host in Red Hat Virtualization. It is a minimal operating system based on Red Hat Enterprise Linux, is distributed as an ISO file from the Customer Portal, and contains only the packages required for the machine to act as a host.

Use "Red Hat Virtualization Host (RHVH)" for the first instance in a section. "RHVH" can be used in subsequent instances. Do not use "the Host" with a capital H.
Use "Red Hat Virtualization Host (RHVH)" for the first instance in a section. You can use "RHVH" in subsequent instances. Do not use "the Host" or capitalize the term "host" when it is not used with the full product name..

*Use it*: yes

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==== image:images/yes.png[yes] resource tab (noun)
*Description*: Hosts, virtual machines, storage, and other resources in Red Hat Virtualization can be managed by using their associated tab.

You can refer to these tabs as just, for example, "the *Storage* tab".
Use the name of the tab when you refer to it, for example, "the *Storage* tab".

*Use it*: yes

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[discrete]
[[standalone-manager]]
==== image:images/yes.png[yes] standalone Manager (noun)
*Description*: "Standalone Manager" is used specifically, and only, in the context of differentiating between a "regular" Red Hat Virtualization environment and a self-hosted engine environment. Use "the Red Hat Virtualization Manager" or "the Manager" in all other cases. See the link:https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_virtualization/4.4/html/product_guide/introduction#Standalone_Manager_Architecture_RHV_intro[_Red Hat Virtualization Product Guide_] for details.
*Description*: Use "Standalone Manager" specifically, and only, in the context of differentiating between a "regular" Red Hat Virtualization environment and a self-hosted engine environment. Use "the Red Hat Virtualization Manager" or "the Manager" in all other cases. See the link:https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_virtualization/4.4/html/product_guide/introduction#Standalone_Manager_Architecture_RHV_intro[_Red Hat Virtualization Product Guide_] for details.

*Use it*: yes

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==== image:images/yes.png[yes] VM Portal (noun)
*Description*: The VM Portal is a graphical user interface provided by the Red Hat Virtualization Manager. It has limited permissions for managing virtual machine resources and is targeted at end users.

Always use "VM Portal", including the capital P.
Always use "VM Portal" and capitalize the product name.

*Use it*: yes

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