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Co-authored-by: Jillian <cjmaroket@outlook.com>

kb/2024-01-30/the_potential_risk_with_fstrim.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: The Potential Risk with Fstrim
+title: Mitigating fstrim Risk
 description: The potential risk with fstrim and how to avoid it
 slug: the_potential_risk_with_fstrim
 authors:
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ You can determine if fstrim is enabled in VMs that use affected Longhorn volumes
     systemctl disable fstrim.timer
     ```
 
-    Or modify the service file to prevent simultaneous fstrim execution. The service file is located at `/usr/lib/systemd/system/fstrim.timer`. You can modify the file as follows:
+    To prevent simultaneous fstrim execution, use the following values in the service file (located at `/usr/lib/systemd/system/fstrim.timer`):
     ```
     [Timer]
     OnCalendar=weekly