chore: Edit chapters: ch00-00, ch01-00, ch02-00 #31
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Common edits: - Replace "nix" with "Nix" - Replace "it's" with "its" - Remove whitespace at line endings ch00-00: - Split lines to avoid linebreaks leaving single words after the linebreak. ch01-00: - Active form (trying -> who try) - Move "The motivation" sentence ahead of "The goal" sentence. - Right-align signature and use ndash instead of "--" ch02-00: - Avoid "which ... which ..." - Emphasise "derivation" with italics - Replace "aggregated" with "hashed": Avoid repetition of "aggregated", simpler - Move FHS wiki link to reference, so it can be reused in "non-FHS" - Extend "Teams of Developers" section: Also mention build environments, mention lower onboarding time. - intended -> intend - Extend "Power Users" section with the argument that you can persist configuration across multiple machines. - Nix Language section: "+ imports" - caputuring -> capturing, truely -> truly, entirity -> entirety, OS's -> OS'es - re-capitalised DAG as "*directed, acyclic graph*"
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- Change questions to active sentences. - Fix casing (Kubernetes, Nixpkgs) - Homogenize subtitle format
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I updated the CI gate, but the textual changes look fine to me |
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Extends:
Common edits:
ch00-00:
ch01-00:
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mention lower onboarding time.
configuration across multiple machines.